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I swear, the title of this post is extremely accurate. It reflects *exactly* what is going on in my head at the moment. What went on in my head yesterday, when I was supposed to post this. Topical Tuesday. I even had a topic (St. Lucy's Day), or exams (very topical for me, since I am going through them at the moment, albeit in a very different way than I've ever done before because I'm not taking them this year, but rather grading them... I swear, I'd rather take them!), or even the weather (we're having spring, I'm sure - all our lovely snow seems to be melting! Drat!)

But no. Before I had the chance to transfer my ideas to paper (or, more accurately, screen), they ended up in fhegiakfiutygihbhjgilwdjafgyg and *poof* I forgot the whole post. Until now. When I write it, it will still be up for an hour and a half before the next one (and much better one, I'm sure) ticks in. Not that it is a huge loss. I'm sure today's actual post will be much more thought-through and well-written than this one, not to mention the topic will not be lkhjefiudshfjkhfuiryifkdghfshdgfj.

In the meantime, though, let me muse a little over cbnsdjkghdgcsdcuhjasdgj:

Papers that need to be graded, need to be graded.

Jobs that need to be done, need to be done.

In English, you cannot write "they claims" and expect to get away with it. It are annoying!

Sometimes you have to make sacrifices. Sometimes they suck.

Friends are essential.

Suck it up!

Can you have your cake and eat it too? Won't we always try?

What's in a smile? When a person lights up when seeing you, should you draw hasty conclusions?

We want what we can't have, we hold on to what we don't need, and sometimes it's impossible to see the difference.

It doesn't matter what you believe in. Believe.

Yoga and boxing.

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Writing Wednesday: On Being Descriptive

Today, I learned a really valuable lesson in writing. During my Geometry class, an unpleasant situation erupted between two of my students. One student, who has a disability and we'll name Student A, was being picked on by another student, who is known as the 11th grade thug and we'll name Student B. I verbally reprimanded Student B for interrupting the education of others and disrupting the learning process. The bullying stopped and the lesson resumed. Later on in my Chemistry class, Student B again began bothering Student A. I pulled Student B into the hallway and gave him a verbal warning.

During my study hall class (yes, I teach three different subjects in addition to coordinating an entire program at the high school), Student A complained of Student B committing more of the same types of behaviors as above. I spoke to the Dean and told her of Student A being harassed by Student B. The Dean stated that I could not use the word "harass" as that was too ambiguous and only used in court hearings. I thought about it for a moment, somewhat offended that I was corrected by a colleague in front of my students. However, she was right!

Consequently, I sat down and reflected about what I was going to write in the incident report. I used descriptive language and threw in many adjectives and adverbs that applied to the behaviors exhibited by Student B. My statement went like this:

Student A has stated that Student B continuously calls his name aloud during class. When Student A gives Student B his attention, he is met with silence. Student B has made rude gestures to Student A such as presenting his middle finger and then boisterously laughing at Student A's reaction. Student B says to Student A "You're my friend!" in a sarcastic manner and recites this repeatedly with a melodic tone. Student A has asked Student B to desist from this behavior. Student B persists in mimicking words vocalized by Student A. This behavior has caused Student A to become angry with an occasional emotional outburst. Student B has been reprimanded and given several verbal warnings. A meeting with his parents has been requested by his History, Math and Science teachers.

Result of the anecdotal- Student B's parent will be conferencing with teachers tomorrow about his behavior.

This brings me to today's topic which is being more descriptive in our writing. I am guilty of jumping right into the meat and potatoes and not really enticing the reader with some appetizers. I could go on and on about adjectives and figurative language. However, I won't bore you. I'll just discuss some tricks that work for me.

One tool which I must have when I am writing is my thesaurus. You know, that book that has words in alphabetical order and tells you the various synonyms you could use in place of words like "thing." Just joking. I know most of us know what a thesaurus is and how to use one. However, you would be amazed at how many of my students do not have a clue as to the value of this great writing tool. I often get stuck when it comes to words like "say/said" and "thing" or find myself repeating the same words throughout my work-in-progress. The thesaurus facilitates my writing when it comes to words like "vocalize" instead of say or "aspect" instead of "thing." I love it!

Also, something that I learned when reflecting upon writing the anecdotal above was that I needed to be really specific when describing the incidents between the students. I originally used words like "harass." Nevertheless, the Dean could not really decipher what actually occurred between the students. I had to state how Student B behaved towards Student A. I had to describe the antecedent event, the behavior itself and the consequence (what did Student B get by behaving this way). It was a truly enlightening moment.

Similarly, when writing about characters and plots, I realize that this same principle applies. I needed to be more detailed in my descriptions of the character's internal thoughts, appearance, behavior and interactions with other characters. By expanding the plot with vivid details, the reader becomes more engrossed and can deepen his or her meaning of the text.

What are some tricks that you use to make your writing more descriptive or specific? I really want to know. I can add your tricks into my little toolbox and can even use them with my students.

All images taken from Wikimedia Commons.